Letters of Recommendation - Writing Power Phrases

As a result of writing literally hundreds of letters ofwho invariably understands exactly what a project is
recommendation over the years, I have learned thatall about."o "[name] consistently produces high quality
there are certain common elements and approacheswork in a timely fashion."o "The only area of
that are applicable to almost all such letters.weakness that I ever noted in [name]'s performance
If you look closely at most recommendation andwas..."
reference letters you will notice that there are certainA typical letter of recommendation will normally include
"types" of phrases that recur over and over again,three to four assessment statements.
throughout the various letters.CLOSING STATEMENTS
These statement types can be grouped into threeThe closing statement in a letter of recommendation
major categories: opening statements, assessmentshould be one or two sentences at most, and it should
statements, and closing statements. These statementsmake a clear statement of recommendation that
are the three key components of any letter offlows logically from the points made in the assessment
recommendation. If you formulate these phrases wellpart of the letter. They will often begin with transition
you are guaranteed to have an excellent letter.phrases such as: "In summary...", "In Closing,...", "Based
OPENING STATEMENTSon the foregoing,...", "Accordingly,...", etc.
The opening statement in a letter of recommendationClosing statements in recommendation letters are
should state the name of the person beinggenerally positive, but in some circumstances they may
recommended. It can also explain why you are thebe qualified, or sometimes, even completely negative.
person writing the letter. The opening statement shouldFollowing are three generic typical closing statements
normally be one short sentence and should neverfor inclusion in recommendation letters:o "I am
exceed two sentences.therefore very pleased to be able to recommend
Following are three generic typical opening statements[name] for..."o "Based on my time working with [name], I
for inclusion in recommendation letters:o "I am writingrecommend her very highly for..."o "I respect [name] as
this letter at the request of [name of requestor]."o "Thisa colleague, but I must say that in all honesty, I cannot
is in response to your recent request for a letter ofrecommend him for..."
recommendation for [name]."o "I am pleased to be ableIn summary, mastering these three types of
to write this letter of recommendation for [name].""recommendation power phrases" is one of the keys
ASSESSMENT STATEMENTSAssessmentto writing all types of letters of recommendation. As
statements in a letter of recommendation are thosesuch, knowledge of how to write typical opening,
sentences and phrases that contain theassessment, and closing statements, as illustrated
recommender's specific assessment of theabove, is essential to writing effective letters of
performance, characteristics, and attributes of therecommendation.
person being recommended.In fact, when I was compiling these phrases for the
Normally an assessment statement will be followed uprevised edition of my book on this subject, I collected
by one or two specific performance-related examplesmore than 150 generic "Recommendation Letter
backing up the statement just made.Power Phrases" .
Following are three generic typical assessmentCopyright © Shaun R. Fawcett. All rights
statements for inclusion in letters of recommendation:oreserved.
"In my opinion, [name] is a hard-working self-starter