Teachers - Poetry For Children - Characteristics and Examples

I believe that one of the most important conceptsImage
about poetry is that, "Like a song, poetry is meant toOf some
be heard" (Larrick, 1987, p. 20). While good prose canSmall fish;
either be read aloud or silently, poetry nearly alwaysOpened, it snaps
needs to be read aloud. That poetry needs to beIts tail out
heard can be attributed to the characteristics ofLike a thin
poetry that distinguish poetry from prose, i.e., rhythm,Shrimp, and looks
sound patterns, figurativeness, compactness, andAt the sharp
emotional intensity (Lukens, 1990). I will explore each ofPoint with a
these in more depth, below:Surprised eye.
An example that I often use when I am first teachingSo much image...so few words!
the attribute of rhythm to students is Carl Sandburg's....Which leads to the next characteristic that children
poem, "Was Ever a Dream A Drum?" [Be sure toneed to know about poetry--its compactness. I once
read this aloud!]heard Virginia Hamilton, the author of young adult
Was ever a dream a drumor a drum a dream?novels, exchanging views with her husband, poet
Can a drummer drum a dreamor a dreamer dream aArnold Adoff, about which one of them had to work
drum?harder. The issue was whether it was more difficult to
The drum in a dreampounds loud to the dreamer.say what you want to say in 15,000 words...or in 15
Now the moon tonight over Indianais a fire-drum of awords. The issue was not resolved, and probably
phantom dreamer.never will be, but students can learn to appreciate the
Carl Sandburg in Hopkins, 1982care with which a poet's words are chosen. Lukens
While reading it aloud, I bang on a desk or the book or(1990) says,
my lap to make the sound of a drum beat that goesThe principal difference between prose and poetry is
along with what I am reading. Then I read it again, onlycompactness. A single word in poetry says far more
this time, the students pound out the rhythm on theirthan a single word in prose; the connotations and
own laps or desks.images hint at, imply, and suggest other meanings. (p.
"Was Ever a Dream a Drum" also can be used to187).
demonstrate how poetry uses sound patterns, that is,Because poetry is so parsimonious with its words,
words as sound. However, my favorite poem to use iseach one carries a great deal of weight. With no pun
"The Man in the Marmalade Hat Arrives," from theintended, look at (and read aloud) part of the poem
Newbery Award-winning book by Nancy Willard, A"ELEPHANT" by Barbara Juster Esbensen:
Visit to William Blake's Inn: Poems for Innocent andThe word is too heavyto lift ...
Experienced Travelers. Just the first stanza (readELEPHANT
aloud, of course) gives you an idea of how WillardHe must have invented ithimself. This is a
used sound patterns in this poem:lumberinggray word the ears of itare huge and flap like
The man in the marmalade hatarrived in the middle ofloosewings a word withwrinkled knees and toeslike
March,equipped with a bottle of starchto straighten theboxing gloves....
bends in the road, he said.A poem that I often read to upper elementary and
He carried a bucket and mop.middle school students is from Arnold Adoff's book
A most incommodious load, he said,and he asked for aSports Pages. It illustrates the last characteristic of
room at the top.poetry that I will be discussing here: emotional intensity.
Children ask to hear that poem over and over--so thatOne poem in this book tells about a boy who twisted
they can play with the language of the poem. Justhis knee in a football game. The next poem begins this
savor saying "a most incommodious load" severalway:
times--and you, too, will be hooked!My Knee Is Only Sprained,is only swollen, andthe
A third characteristic of poetry is the author's use ofdoctor says I will befine. I'll play again.
words as meaning, i.e., figurativeness. Worth's All theHe says this as hesits on his paddedleather chair
Small Poems book is filled with examples you can usethatcan swivel 360 degrees.
for this characteristic. A wonderful specimen is herOhwhy can't knees?
poem entitled "Safety Pin." [You may want to have aOnce children know about these characteristics of
safety pin to look at while you read and enjoy thispoetry (i.e., rhythm, sound patterns, figurativeness,
poem!]compactness, and emotional intensity), they will enjoy
Closed, it sleepsthe challenge of finding poems that exemplify one or
On its sidemore of the characteristics. Their appreciation of
Quietly,poetry is enhanced through their additional knowledge.
The silverThey are ready to experience poetry more fully.